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Jun 4 04 4:34 PM

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Broken Ch. 6

JT was laying in bed just looking up at the celing trying not to think about what had happend the night before.

"The locket belongs to Mac now....." Remembering what Colleen had said to him. He knew she couldnt' disguise the pain in her voice when she had said that. God so many emotions ran through his head.

"JT...JT are you home?" Mac said coming into the apartment.
"Yeah Mac, I'll be right out" JT grabbed a shirt threw it on and walked out into the living room to see his girlfriend sitting there.

"Hey hun" Mac said getting up to give JT a kiss on the lips. Instead JT moved his head aside and let her kiss him on the cheek. He didn't know what it was but he knew it was now diffrent. Like no one could kiss him again since Colleen and him kissed at the park.
"So...umm what time are you picking me up tonight?" Mac said ignoring what had just transpired.
"Tonight? What's going on tonight?" JT questioned
"JT..Remember the huge party tonight at the Athletic club for Jabot's new line coming out" Mac questioned him
"Oh Yeah that's right I forgot about that"
"Well yeah....since it's almost 4:00 now and the party starts at 6:00 I have to run to the boutique to get some earrings, and since my dress is already there you can just pick up there. Is that ok JT?" Mac said getting up
"Yah, Mac that's fine" JT said not really paying attention
"JT...are you ok?"
"Yeah don't worry about anything, I'll see you later tonight" JT said leaning down and giving Mac a kiss.
"K see you later babe" said Mac walking out the door.

JT sat there and thought about what the night would bring. Would Colleen be there tonight? Of course she would be JT, her family owns the whole damn company. Well this shall be a splendid evening JT thought walking into the bathroom to get ready for the big night that no one would ever forget.

Broken Ch. 7

At the Athletic Club the place was booming with activity. Everyone and anyone was there to see Jabot's new line being put out. Hopefully it would be huge success in the wake of everything that happend with Newman. JT and Mac came into the club noticing just how many people were there. JT wore a black tux, with a white tie and a jacket that came down mid thigh, he had to admit he did look good. Mac was breathtaking in a pale pink dress that was long with a slit up the side so you could see her tan legs. If anyone would be looking at this couple from a far they would think they were the most attractive ones there. JT looked and saw the whole Abbott family there, yet no signs of Colleen.

Mac and JT went around and mingled with people, JT trying to get his mind of the person that was haunting him day and night. Just then fate loves to play tricks on him Colleen and her three friends enter the club. All eyes went to them, for there attaire was a little out there. Rachel had picked a beautiful red gown from Fenmore's yet spiced it up with a touch of her own. She had black high boots on with fishnet stalkings. The boys were dressed in funky tuxes and still wore there hats. No one knew what to think of these kids. Yet, the best was yet to come. Colleen Carlton had taken her jacket off to reveal a outfit that would even make Britney look twice. She wore a strapless black lace dress, with just a little slip under it. She also had high strappy heels on. Her long brown hair was all pulled up on the top of her head in bundles of curls. JT thought she looked breathtaking, but could see the Abbott clan defitnetly dissaproving.

Colleen and her three friends made there way down the stairs and towards the dance floor. Just like that they started dancing making everyone stare at these out of control teens. No one could beleive that this girl was an Abbott, let alone behaving like this. The whole Abbott clan continued to stare as people started talking. At that instant Brad headed right to Colleen.

"Young lady I dont' know what kind of stunt you are trying to pull here but it's is nor tasteful or wanted" Brad said in a quiet voice so no one would hear
"Oh come on Dad, Ryder, Rachel Jack and I are just having some fun" Colleen said giggling.
"Listen Colleen this night is very important to Jabot, if your going to act like this then you might as well leave, so get your friends and get out" Brad said walking away from her
"That's Right DAD make me leave, throw me out again because I'm not living up to the Abbott reputation" COlleen said yelling.

At this point everyone stopped what they were doing and started to stare at the incidnet taking place.

"I dont even know why I came back here! It's obvious you dont' want me!" Colleen said yelling more
"Colleen, will you stop it people are going to hear!" Brad said lowering his voice
"Good BRAD let them listen to what I have to say" Colleen said getting louder.

At this point JT saw that this wasn't going to stop. So without thinking he decided to get right in the middle of it. He didn't know what made him do it but he knew that Colleen needed help and he was still willing to try.

"Colleen, come on let's go outside" JT said approaching her.
"I don't want to go ANYWHERE with you JT, Do you hear me?" Colleen said yelling
"Please Colleen, people are staring!" JT said looking around and the 300 guests in the Athletic club watching the events unfold
"So what JT!! Everyone stares!!! Look it's Colleen Carlton! Poor Collen, first her father Brad abondons her when she's a child. Then wait, More staring!! Look it's Colleen Cartlon who got dumped in Genoa City with a father she never knew because the man that she was calling Dad ended up cheating on her mother!!! But that's not all JT!!! Look it's Colleen Cartlon, Poor Colleen she has developed a thing for JT Hellstrom, womanzier of Genoa City!! God no what would he do with a 15 year old girl, he's just gonna use her!!! Look stare some more, Poor Colleen Carlton, who was willing to give her boyfriend EVERYTHING yet he sat there and turned her down right to her face. No Colleen it's not you I swear, it's me. But look stare some more, It's Colleen Carlton, whose boyfriend was getting serviced somewhere else by his Ex-Girlfriends mother, Anita Hodges!!!! And wait here's my favorite part, look it's Colleen Carlton who gave up the most important thing she had in her life, who she loved to much so that he could persue his music career caz she THOUGHT that meant so much to him, only to find out that he turned around and went to be with someone else. So Yeah JT let's them stare they have been doing that for a long time!" Colleen said hysterical, before anyone could respond she grabbed her jacket and fled the athletic club.

JT was stunned at what had just happend. She had totally lost it. He didn't know she held in so much pain and anger and hurt about everything. Running over to Brit, Raul and Mac he grabbed his jacket.

"I'm sorry to jet you on you guys but I have to go after her." JT said
"Why JT? She doesn't need you to be her hero anymore!" Mac said getting angry
"Mac, I have to do this, if you don't understand why, then I don't know what to tell you" JT said walking away
"What I don't understand is you running after her every time she decides to be a bigger bitch that she was before" Mac yelled running after him
"Don't Mackenzie, do not call her that, Listen I need to go" JT pleaded with her
"If you go after her JT that's it we're done, I'm tired of playing second to her"
"I'm sorry Mackenzie, If you don't know why I have to this, than you don't know me at all, Goodbye" JT said giving her a kiss on the cheek. With that he was off looking for Colleen

JT scrambled through the streets thinking where she might of been. He went to the park, Crimson lights, the boutique and then even her house. No sign of her anywhere. One more place came to mind as he headed towards the hideaway. As he walked in he saw her just standing there staring at the wall.

"You know this was this same exact place where you told me you would never want to get rid of me, and I was the best thing to ever happen to you" JT said approaching her.

"So Colleen, did you mean it?




*There you go guys!! I'll post soon! Thanks for the feedback *

*!Meg!*

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Jun 4 04 5:21 PM

I have to say this is a really great story! I can't wait to read more! It's so great! I hope you post more really soon!!!!

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"Telegraph, Telephone, Tell a friend i'm leavin'"
--Telegraph by Drake Bell

"Why'd it have to happen to me
Why'd it have to hurt so bad"--Hollywood Girl by Drake Bell

"Colleen, I will always need you. Always! And I don't accept this. You can push me away all you want, but I'm not throwing in the towel where you and I are concerned. I'm not. I gotta go back to L.A. And handle some things, but when I get back here, we're gonna work this--"--JT

"I won't be here. I wasn't gonna tell you this now, but I'm going to New York."--Colleen

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Jun 4 04 8:00 PM

lovely chapter.....please post more!

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